From the reflection, I realized I had some awkward phrases, which I listened too and ultimately took out. I also worked on the presentation of the pitch itself, and tried to change my body language and gestures.
Hey Nick! Great job on adjusting the content of your pitch after self-reflecting and receiving feedback. It’s good that you were able to spot where the awkward phrases were and could just easily remove them. I also had to work on my body language and gestures after realizing that even just the slightest difference in movements can make the difference between captivating and distracting.
Hey Nick, I think you did a good job reviewing your feedback from your last pitch and incorporating those changes into this attempt. It's good that you were honest with yourself and tried to improve as much as possible. I think your pitches have been improving with every attempt and are very good. I think your idea has developed really well.
Hey Nick, I enjoyed watching your video. I like how you took the feedback and made adjustments to you pitch. By making those slight adjustments, it can make a positive difference in delivery and the fluidness of your pitch. Great job.
Hey Nick!
ReplyDeleteGreat job on adjusting the content of your pitch after self-reflecting and receiving feedback. It’s good that you were able to spot where the awkward phrases were and could just easily remove them. I also had to work on my body language and gestures after realizing that even just the slightest difference in movements can make the difference between captivating and distracting.
Hey Nick,
ReplyDeleteI think you did a good job reviewing your feedback from your last pitch and incorporating those changes into this attempt. It's good that you were honest with yourself and tried to improve as much as possible. I think your pitches have been improving with every attempt and are very good. I think your idea has developed really well.
Hey Nick,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed watching your video. I like how you took the feedback and made adjustments to you pitch. By making those slight adjustments, it can make a positive difference in delivery and the fluidness of your pitch. Great job.